Friday, January 16, 2015
Rubric of food essay
In this food essay, follow the rubric I think I can get 3. I had a thesis statement and repeated in the conclusion part. The body paragraphs looks a little bit falling apart. I did not mention that I would write about all the details of dumplings so people may be confused with what I talk about.
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