SPELLING BEE

The 25th Annual Putnam County Spelling Bee was a famous musical comedy. It even played in Broadway. It talks about a story happened in the The 25th Annual Putnam County Spelling Bee. The way to present this story was music and singing. There were about 9charaters and some audience join the show, which is amazing. Rona Lisa Peretti, Douglas Panch, Mitch Mahoney, Olive Ostrovsky, William Barfée, Logainne Schwartzandgrubenierre, Marcy Park, Leaf Coneybear, Chip Tolentino are the main characters of the show. Follow the order, they go onto the stage and spell the word. The show starts with a flashback and more flashbacks in the show. Lots of characters think of their past spelling bee and understand that wining is not that important. They are given different difficulty of words to spell and this caused the unsatisfactory of some characters. Everytime a actor or audience spells a word wrong, they will start to sing a goodbye song to send him away, certainly, actor do that I propose. The songs can always attract people when the actor start to sing it in the suitable time such us when they come to the stage and start to sing I am talent. AT LAST when the spelling bee come to the end, they sing for the winner and then tell people about what happen in the future of the character, which come back to the realistic. 

This show won a lot of awards for its amazing performance and the careful design. They all make the show fun to watch and full of educational meaning.

Social experience is more important than money

Field trips for school are often very usual events take place in high school. In the past 3 years, Cheshire Academy held a lot of amazing field trips to many places. Field trips divide into different types, most of them have a special aim for students to learn. This situation, Cheshire Academy decide to cancel all field trip for saving money and lowering tuition fees, become a serious question no doubt. Depends on the statement of school, this action is focusing on the financial problem, which against the rule of education. Cheshire Academy are trying to limit students vision for lowering the consumption, but that should not happen in high school. Although students are not pay attention to those meaningful field trip, Cheshire academy should still continue attending the field trips for the complete education.

The fact shows that, students those who go to the field trip can have a better development than other. The truth need to be experiment; the best chances to experiment what students learnt in the classes are field trip. Whatever students are focusing or not, they always learn something from the field trips. The situation of the Cheshire Academy field trips is students do not go into the trips. Most of the time they are hanging around because they don't know the importance of them. When I was studying about the situation, the first thing came up in my mind was not cancel ling the trips but teaching the students how important the trips are. The way that canceling the trips are irresponsible. 

The necessity of field trip is the most important reason why we can not cancel them.   Students pay for the field trips to learn the experiences they can not receive in the class. The experiences of the experiment will bring them more valuable knowledges than the in-class studying. After the school, all the students will play a new role in a community, and that will be too late to study the social communication. When a company wants to employee some new workers for their productions, they prefer to choose workers those who have a longer working age. Why will that happen? That is because those people have more social experiences than those new student  with a lot of useless theoretical knowledges. They will make less mistakes than those 'flowers in the greenhouse'. Start in the high school, students should have this idea that they can not stay in the theoretical level forever. It's too late to pay and learn after your graduation. 

Although the cost is high, we can not give up our fields trips by a financial problem. It is necessary for students to learn about the society when they are studying in a high school. Canceling the school trip to save money and lower school tuition can not be taken place in Cheshire Academy. I appeal the administrator to keep attending the field trips and in another hand, teach they student how important they are.

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Gregory, the Cat

Gregory, a wonderful gray Persian cat, is one of my favorite pet. He has pride and grace; His amazing steps make him so special. If I use a word to describe the slowly lifting and lowering of his paws, that will be 'dancer'. His pride, however, does not reveal by his appearance, for most of the time he enjoys to stay inside, watching television and getting fat. He fell in love with TV commercials, especially those fancy programs for Meow Mix and 9 Lives. After comparing with the cat food in commercials, he decided to detest some kinds of cat food; he would rather to choose the most expensive products. To the visitors, Gregory treats the as picky about visitors as he treating about what he eats. He choose to be friends with some people he interested with, but never be friendly to others. He may snuggle up against your ankle, begging to be petted, or he may be like a little demon and bite you. Gregory disdains to do this for establishing his territory, as many cat experts think, but to humiliate me because he is jealous of my friends. After my guests left with a helpless face, I look at the sweet old fleabag snoozing and smiling to himself in front of the TV, and I am always acts like I do not see his obnoxiousness, but adorable experience he makes.

The amazing stories

These days I shocked a lot of times and you want to know why? I was so surprised because of my classmates' twisted stories. They are so amazing and twisted my brain! My little heart got shocked a lot by them. They turned over my world outlook completely. Was it the world I live in? I kept thinking on this question for a long time.

Gordon’s story was a nice one. In his twisted story, two characters are Jason and Andy.Because Allen Liu is one of my closest friends,I know the one who got into BU was him, so actually that “Andy”was Allen. The climax of the stories is Allen says his photo is so ugly. I know that Gordon makes this happened in propose and it made me laugh. At the beginning Jason and Allen talks about his college, that should be the way they talk. I thought of the scene when Allen and Jason talked, that looked not like the communication in the stories at all. If this happen in the realistic, I am sure Jason will blame on Allen.

Another stories interested my was Amanda’s stories. I read it at a quiet night. Although it did not scare me, it made me think of so experience I had in my memory. When I was in middle school, I love to looked at the shadow before I got into sleep. The lights from the car passed through the leaves on the tree, and projected on the white wall. Every night, I fell into sleep with those shadow. The shadows are always the similar in the same season. When the car passed the street, I could see the shadows expanding. In the night of summer, I loved to watch on the air condition. The light on the air condition looked like a demon’s face in some ways. While I was reading the witch’s face part, I got an idea that it must be something normal. In my childhood, I was scared once by a face made by clothes and a cell phone.

The most interesting one was Sophia’s stories with her father. In my idea, a girl’s father should take care her daughter so carefully. If I am a girl’s father, I think I will try my best to look after her. In the stories, Sophia’s father amazed everyone. In most of the stories we heard before. Men always try to protect women beside him. In most of the romantic stories, men take off the clothes and put on girls in the rain. Those scenes affects everyone. Now it becomes a prototype that men should take care of girls. The most twisted story I read this time belongs to Sophia. His father changed my world vision. In the community, men don’t need to care about their daughters, they just need to care about themselves. But, at least, I won’t agree with that.