letter final draft

Dear Annie
Hi, Annie. My name is Winda. Now I work in a small company in New York Cit. I am now working with my partner, a business man called Ray. We are doing the Medical Devices business. We are now on a hard way of making our business range wider. 
I heard about your story with Jim; our pasts are quite similar. Ray was quite arrogant before. He insisted his own idea for ever although it disturbed a lot of people. When I tried to get his attention, he even threatened me that he would look for another assistant. I can endure him in many ways, because I love him,but other people can not. He received punishment from the El company, that biggest Medical Devices company in New York. He lost all the thing he had before, the same as Jim. I hope my experience can help you in some ways. I heard you left when he insisted on giving all his money to Sam. I cannot tell it is right or wrong, but at least, you may give him some help when he was in the worst situation. You loved each other all the time right?

Annie, what I chose was staying with him. I pointed way for him when he was in low ebb. Even I think Ray is more stubborn that Jim, I didn’t leave him. They only chose a wrong way. People always make mistakes; you and me make mistake too. Why not try to understand them, moreover Jim was chasing his dream. Annie,you may try to go back with Jim. You had a happy past, then you will have a happy future. He had already gotten his punishment. 

Please give him some hope. We both don’t want to see him sink into despair, right?

Your faithfully

 Winda Gusto

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Dear Annie
Hi, Annie. My name is Winda. Now I work in a small company in New York Cit. I am now work with my partner, a business man called Ray. We are doing the Medical Devices business. We are now on a hard way of making our business range wider. 
I heard about your story with Jim; our pasts are quite similar. Ray was quite arrogant before. He insisted his own idea for ever although it disturbed a lot of people. When I tried to get his attention, he even threatened me that he would look for another assistant. I can endure him in many ways, because I love him,but other people can not. He receive punishment from the El company, that biggest Medical Devices company in New York. He lost all the thing he had before, the same as Jim. I hope my experience can help you in some ways. I heard you left when he insisted to give all his money to Sam. I cannot tell it is right or wrong, but at least, you may give him some help when he was in the worst situation. You loved each other all the time right?

Annie, what I chose was staying with him. I pointed a way for him when he was in low ebb. Even I think Ray is more stubborn that Jim, I didn’t leave him. They only chose a wrong way. People always make mistakes, you and me make mistake too. Why not try to understand them, moreover Jim was chasing his dream. Annie, try to go back with Jim. You had a warm past, then you will have a happy future. He had already gotten his punishment. 

Please give him some hope. We both don’t want to see him sink into despair, right?

Your faithfully

 Winda Gusto

Dialogue

Winda pulled him out of the room.

“Ray, you can not handle this business follow your own idea any more! This one isn’t like those easy things we did before. You know what, if you keep rejecting their ideas, I promise you will get in big trouble!”

“What trouble? They’ll bite me? Winda, this is my business. Sometimes I need an assistant, but sometimes not.”

“Ray.” Winda calmed down fast. “Maybe you don’t know. That El company always has some unusual means. If we can not satisfy their requirement in some way, we won’t have peaceful day for business.”

“Winda, when did you become so timid? I am confident about it, so as my assistant, you should have confidence, too. Let me show you how I do business.”

“I know more than you do.” Winda thought.

Then the meeting started again.

Ray“Thanks for your waiting. I appreciate it. We had some private problem to solve.”

Businesses man“That’s fine. Let’s continued to talk about our business. The hospital needs some titanium plates, and I heard that yours are the best.”

Ray“Absolutely. Winda, bring the propaganda for me.”” Ray said confidently with a smile. “I promise our products are the best of this medical devices business. We also have a good prize for those awesome products. .

Ray“Through this propaganda, you can see why our products are the best. Best drill is made by best material. We don’t want some problems take place during the operation right? I did a research for that hospital, what they need are complete medical devices system. If you can give this job to us, I promise you can get a satisfying answer.” 

Businesses man“ Mr. Creuset. What we are asking are lower prizes titanium plates but not tons of machine.”

Ray“What? Tons of machine? Those equipment can not be counted with tons. You call it...”

Businessman“Or we can call it  tons of trash. Don't be that arrogant, Mr. Creuset. We are the customers but not you. Your arrogance already disturbed us. You and your tiny 'company' will get punished. ” The man in the black suit said with a sneer.

Ray“Get out of here. I’ll never do business with you disrespectful people. Get out! Winda, let them out!”

winda：i am so sorry for his unreasonable words.he he is not like this before.maybe He is in a bad mood today. I promised I will give you a answer after I talk with him，so plz，plz give us a chance.

Business man：“Chance? Aha Our disrespect people never give any chances. Enjoy the last few days in his company. This company will not be existed soon. See you, Poor assistant."

website of the video

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zvBpkAF90JM

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Creative writing is interesting

How can famous writer be famous? The main point of a good writing is how this writing attracts people. When people writing creative writing, they always involuntarily limited into some laws. Creative writing can usually be novel and poem. Do you like to read novel in a format? The answer is no. People like to read about those novel which has a constrained style. It gives people a lot of space to imagine. When people read these novel, they are focusing on the plot, theme and climax but not language, grammar and vocab. Creative writing is different from other because it has special personality, independent thinking and different presentation.

How can a creative writing be creative? First people put their own ideas into their writing. With strong personality, a creative writing can attract more people. People do not read for taking an exam, they read for fun. After a writing has a strong personality, it becomes a real creative writing about not essay. 

Different from essay, creative writing doesn’t need to refer some master piece. People usually don’t refer too much information except science fiction. How can the plot come out when people do the creative writing? It all comes from the their memory and imagination. Why creative writing can be in a constrained style? That is the kind of writing people want to read. 

Creative writing usually has different presentation with other writing. Said before, creative writing doesn’t have any formats. It can be full of dialogue and tons of environment description. It may not have beginning and ending. Generally creative writing is a piece of writing that written follow people’s heart. Creative writing focus on description of those characters. Writer can give those character obviously personality by writing dialogue, which do not appear in formal essay.

Creative has the differences so it becomes special. If people ask me which type thing I love to write, my answer is creative writing. If people ask me which type thing I love to read, my answer is creative writing, too. Creative is always fun to read and write. What I did for this week’s creative writing pieces, is writing different parts when I get idea, then joint them together. This way some time make the writing become loose, but it makes sure that all parts of this creative writing is interesting. Most part of my creative writing is dialogue. I tried to use dialogue to give my character strong personality. Also I give a attractive plot, A rich man and his assistant work together . People usually say this kind of plot is not attractive any more, but they still love to read it. We start to think about the creative writing from a only a picture, so people can have a lot of space to imagine. Even with a same painting we can have a lot ideas for writing. That how creative writing becomes interesting.

final draft

Zen Fan9/26/2014Ms Guarino
W&C3
                       Things We Miss“Winda, hang the telephone up. I don’t deal with these cheaters anymore.” “OK, my boss. But that is a big business.”“I don’t care about it. Hang it up or I will hang you up.”Ray always does the business only follow his own heart. Maybe because he became a millionaire by himself since he set up his company only for 6 months, Ray never listens to other people’s ideas. Ray does the business of medical devices.Ray can do this business well as a thrusting person.
...
Winda pulled him out of the room. 
“Ray, you can not handle this business follow your own idea any more! This one isn’t like those easy pies we did before. You know what, if you keep rejecting their ideas, I promise you will get in big trouble!”
“What trouble? They’ll bite me? Winda, this is my business. Sometimes I need an assistant, but sometimes not.”
“Ray.” Winda calmed down fast. “Maybe you don’t know. That El company always has some unusual means. If we can not satisfy their requirement in some way, we won’t have peaceful day for business.”
“Winda, when did you become such timid? I am confident about it, so as my assistant, you should have confidence, too. Let me show you how I do business.”
“I know more than you do.” Winda thought.
Then the meeting started again.
“Thanks for your waiting. I appreciated. We had some private problem to solve.”
“That’s fine. Let’s continued to talk about our business. The hospital needs some titanium plates, and I heard that yours are the best.”
“Absolutely.” Ray said confidently with a smile. “I promise our products are the best of this medical devices business. We also have a good prize for those awesome products. Winda, bring the propaganda for me.”
Winda took out those books in her hand and gave them to Ray.
“Through this propaganda, you can see why our products are the best. Best drill is made by best material. We don’t want some problems take place during the operation right? I did a research for that hospital, what they need are complete medical devices system. If you can give this job to us, I promise you can get a satisfying answer.” “ Mr. Creuset. What we are asking are lower prizes titanium plates but not tons of machine.”
“What? Tons of machine? Those equipment can not be counted with tons. You call it...”
“Or we can call it  tons of trash. Don't be that arrogant. We are the customers but not you. Your arrogance already disturbed us. You and your tiny 'company' will get punished. ” The man in the black suit said with a sneer.
“Get out of here. I’ll never do business with you disrespectful people. Get out! Winda, let them out!”
...
Under the familiar building, Ray looks up to the sky. The world is wide but where he should be. He has already lost everything he had before, money, friends even the strength to be alive. 
“Where I should go, there is no home for me.” 
When Ray is on the edge of collapse, a hand put on his shoulder. 
“Want to take a walk with me?” That familiar always makes he feel calm. 
“But Winda, I...” 
“Hush, Follow me. I have something you want to see.” On the way, both two people doesn’t say anything any more. 
What shown in front of Ray is Central Park.
Ray has never been here. As he think, park is a place for children, old and unoccupied people. Ray always considers himself as a successful high level person. “I am nothing now.” Ray thinks about those things with a forced smile. 
“See, This is the place I came.”  
With a rusty gate, the Central Park is quiet and peaceful. That frightening quiet makes Ray tremble. It gets darker, with a little rain. 
“Come under my umbrella and keep going.” Winda takes out a umbrella as a magician. 
“Pass through here, you will get your answer.”
Ray can not believe what just happened. Everything got bright after he passed through the gate. Trees are multicolored, Ray never seen any trees like this. Under the multicolored trees. Ray seems to see all the thing happened before. Those failure, those hypocritical friends or those days in despair mean nothing to him. They were just a short period in his long colorful life. Passing through it , he will see the bright tomorrow. 
“I love rainy days, they make these trees much prettier, aren’t they?” 
“Not really. If they are pretty, they are always pretty.” 
“What a pity. I think the trees are more multicolored with setting off by raindrops.” 
“They don’t need those raindrops, my dear.” 
“Hey, it that mean you want me to be your dear?” 
“Yes, my Winda.” 
“But I don’t want be with you now."

Zen Fan

9/23/2014

Ms Guarino

W&C3

                       Things We Miss

“Winda, hang the telephone up. I don’t deal with these cheater anymore.” 

“OK, my boss. But that is a big business.”

“I don’t care about it. Hang it up or I will hang you up.”

Ray always does the business only follow his own heart. Maybe because he became a millionaire by himself since he set up his company only for 6 months, Ray never listens to other people’s ideas. Ray does the business of medical devices. This is a business which should do tolerantly, but Ray can do well as a thrusting person. 

...

Under the familiar building, Ray looks up to the sky. The world is wide but where he should be. He has already lost everything he had before, money, friends even the strength to be alive. 

“Where I should go, there is no home for me.” 

When Ray is on the edge of collapse, a hand put on his shoulder. 

“Want to take a walk with me?” That familiar always makes he feel calm. 

“But Winda, I...” 

“Hush, Follow me. I have something you want to see.” On the way, both two people doesn’t say anything any more. 

What shown in front of Ray is Central Park.

Ray has never been here. As he think, park is a place for children, old and unoccupied people. Ray always considers himself as a successful high level person. “I am nothing now.” Ray thinks about those things with a forced smile. 

“See, This is the place I came.”  

With a rusty gate, the Central Park is quiet and peaceful. That frightening quiet makes Ray tremble. It gets darker, with a little rain. 

“Come under my umbrella and keep going.” Winda takes out a umbrella as a magician. 

“Pass through here, you will get your answer.”

Ray can not believe what just happened. Everything got bright after he passed through the gate. Trees are multicolored, Ray never seen any trees like this. Under the multicolored trees. Ray seems to see all the thing happened before. Those failure, those hypocritical friends or those days in despair mean nothing to him. They were just a short period in his long colorful life. Passing through it , he will see the bright tomorrow. 

“I love rainy days, they make these trees much prettier, aren’t they?” 

“Not really. If they are pretty, they are always pretty.” 

“What a pity. I think the trees are more multicolored with setting off by raindrops.” 

“They don’t need those raindrops, my dear.” 

“Hey, it that mean you want me to be your dear?” 

“Yes, my Winda.” 

“But I don’t.”

Painting essay

Zen Fan

Writing Comptition 2

9/21/2014

Ms Guarino

                          Wordless Painting,Wordless Love

It is an unknown painting. We don't know who the author is. However it can give you an deep memory of it. Most of those famous painters were not that famous when they were alive. People always find it after those masters passed away. There is no name for this painting. It is only sold for 100 dollar, but it gives me a crush when I saw it.The first time I saw this painting, I saw several colors of the leaves. These colors caught my sight so I chose it without thinking. There are always a lot of excellent art works drawn by unknow painters, but people never pay attention to them. Maybe we can just say that they are unlucky I think it is a excellent painting because of the light , the artistic conception and the emotion.

The light in the picture is a little dim because it is evening. We can still see its bright tone.With describing the warmth feeling,the painter use bright color instead of dark. This bright color gives us emotion of hope and warm. This is why color can affect the feeling of people. For example blue can mean depressed.Green can mean life. Red can mean enthusiasm. The author uses lots of colors to draw it, especially the tree beside the road. The street lamp illuminate both the path and the trees. The whole picture makes us think about the bright future. 

Background of the painting is in a park .The weather was a little rainy so ground is wet.There are two people walk on the path. The environment looks peaceful and warm harmony. Author describes a scene of walking after little rain. In ancient chinese poem, rain usually relates to melancholy. Poets were interested in using rain to describe their sadness. In this painting, we can not see those rain drops. What we can see is the rain on the ground. As my idea, it means all the melancholy is gone.  After the rain the couple go to the park for a walk which is a sweet and beautiful action.They are doing this maybe for dating or for memorizing. 

The emotion in the painting put it into a higher level. People may give it a higher grade with these hidden emotion. Those colorful trees in the dark evening gives people a motion of warm. Accompanying the couple walk on the path, it gives a emotion of hope, to find the other one. The water on the ground make people feel fresh and pure. People will feel have a bright feeling when they look at this painting. There are no other people except the couple, which shows the tranquility of the night. The world falls into sleep; only the couple walk on the path. Although the sky is dark, the light in their heart is still bright. 

Light, artistic conception and emotion give this painting the differences comparing with other painting. In this scene, lovers walk together, lean to each other， all of these show harmony and peaceful. We can feel the felicity without language. The author tried to make us feel the same thing with he thinks. I think this painting is really successful. People may understand the meaning of this painting.

        It is an unknown painting. We don't know who the author is. However it can give you an deep memory of it. Most of those famous painters were not that famous when they were alive. People always find it after those master passed away. There is no name for this painting. It is only sold for 100 dollar, but it gives me a crush when I saw it.The first time I saw this painting, I saw Several colors of the leaves. These colors caught my sight. I chose it without thinking.  I think it is a excellent painting because of the light , the artistic conception and the emotion. 

        The light in the picture is a little dim because it is evening. We can still see its bright tone.With describing the warmth feeling,the painter use bright color instead of dark. This bright color gives us emotion of hope and warm. This is why color can affect the feeling of people. For example blue can mean depressed.Green can mean life. Red can mean enthusiasm. 

        Background of the painting is in the park .There was a little rainy so ground is wet. 2 people walk on the road with a umbrella. Rain usually gives a feeling
looks peaceful and warm harmony. After the rain a couple go to the park for a walk, sweet and beautiful, maybe for dating, maybe for memorizing. Colorful trees in the dark evening gives people a motion of warm. The water on the ground make people feel fresh and pure.
In this environment, lovers walk together， lean to each other， harmony and peaceful. Without language , we can feel the felicity. The author tried to give us feeling and I think he is successful.

wordless painting，wordless love

                                                       wordless painting，wordless love
  The first time I saw this painting, I saw Several colors of the leaves. These colors caught my sight. The light in the picture is a little dim because it is evening. Background of the painting is in the park ,there was a little rainy so ground is wet. 2 people walk on the road with a umbrella
looks peaceful and warm harmony. After the rain a couple go to the park for a walk, sweet and beautiful, maybe for dating, maybe for memorizing. Colorful trees in the dark evening gives people a motion of warm. The water on the ground make people feel fresh and pure.
In this environment, lovers walk together， lean to each other， harmony and peaceful. Without language , we can feel the felicity. The author tried to give us feeling and I think he is successful.

Collage

Zen Fan
9/15/2014
Writing 3
Ms Guarino

                                   My way for writing
  Writing for me is a great thing to do. I love writing when I was in China. I felt my feeling and motion are completely spread out on the paper. When I am holding the pen, I feel I can not stop my hand. After I come to America, the wish of writing became less and less. I think it is because of poor vocab I have. Science Fiction, the most interesting type of writing attracts me the most. I love to read everything relate to time machine. Imagination is always good for me. Being considerate with the character in those book, I can find infinite fun. At free time, sometimes I read newspaper, one way to learn about the society. I often write short novel about normal students' lives when I was in China; now I write essay for classes. I seldom do writing now after school. I prefer to writing in pen than writing with those new technology. The feeling with holding a pen in hand is helpful for writing with your own motion. I put the collage like this because Science Fiction is my favourite type of writing and time machine is the funnest thing I think. I love to read newspaper as a relax. For now, I do not do writing after school.My writing process is very simple. First I think about the general information about what I want to write. With trying to write short paragraph I will think about how to joint them. The paragraph I write first will be the most interesting part. With connecting all the paragraph together, my writing product will be finished.I love imaging about how the future like. I always think about what will happen if i can go back to the past. That is always fun to think and write. I also love to write a ideal world in the future. Everything is designed. People are what they should be what decided before they are born. Is that fun?

Celluloid is the first song I love. Celluloid is a kind of material to make film. It looks like ivories.This song describe a person thinks about how to treat life. With watching the darkness out of the window, the person is looking forward to finding the hope. Why does life continue? The person tried to understand it and looked for a way to smile. I love this song because the atmosphere. The one stand in front of the window with looking at the dark sky, thinking about the life.
Letter song
The song is the singer sings for herself in the future. Asking how about the life, she shows the fear and the hope of the future. Things she cares,things she misses become all of her questions. She will miss all the things she can not relinquish. With saying goodbye to the past, she expect to have a better future.
I always thinks about future and I can never give up missing my past. If I can I will choose live in the past. This song gives me courage to look forward to the future.
Saika
This song talks about the temporal have their lives. Flowers are in full bloom temporarily. They will finally fade the same as human. The thing I love the most of the song is the last part. The "YaYiYa~" sound was really beautiful.

My three goals to the classes.
First one is finishing homework on time.
Second one is writing good articles.
Third is getting a good grade in writing session.

Mark Twain

The secret of getting ahead is getting started.
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