OMG! My goals...
My three goals to the classes.
First one is finishing homework on time.
Second one is writing good articles.
Third is getting a good grade in writing session.
Second one is writing good articles.
Third is getting a good grade in writing session.
Those were my 3 goals at the beginning of the year. Actually I forgot about some of those goals after I wrote them. But I follow the main direction I chose at the beginning of the year. I worked hard on writing essays. These two months were so different with last year. For writing class, I felt the homework was too much at the beginning, because I seldom wrote for 500-600 words in English before. I was not familiar with it. After these two months, I feel my writing skill improved a lot. I can not believe I have done so much work. That was amazing.
For the first goal which is finishing homework on time, I was so sorry that I did not figure out when should we due blog. For real, that was the first time I heard that students should due homework on Saturday. I thought a lot about it when I heard I was 2 days late. I can not understand at all at the beginning. I have a bad habit that I never look at the portal until Sunday evening. Ms Guarino’s writing class helped me change my bad habit. Now I will take a look at portal on Friday evening and finish the homework on Saturday. When I heard I was late to due my homework, I knew that I must improve that and now I am improving it.
My second goal was writing good articles. I can not say something absolutely for this goal. My grammar was not that bad so I can say that I did kind of well in my grammar part. As the significant moment essay said, I did too much in analysis. I thought that motions can affect people the most so I misunderstood the importance of stories. My analysis looked fell into parts when I didn’t have enough stories. It can not called pathos if I even do not have logos. I tried to change this after Ms Guarino told me, and it worked. My essay looked more colorful that before, and I have more interests in writing it. I feel happy about I am keeping improving.
My third goal was getting a good grade in writing session. This one is the thing I am worrying about the most. The only subject I can not predict is writing, because I got some 70+ points in blogs. This may hurt my grade a lot. If I got a B- then I can not get a high grade for my first GPA this year. I wonder that at least I can get a B then I still have chance to get First Honor.
I knew that I still have a lot of thing to do in writing. After waste the first two month chaotically, I think my writing lesson will walk on a right path.
Zen, this post is very good. You lost some points, however, because you did not include an image or link to make the post more appealing to readers. 88
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