Summary

His blog post are usually relate to politics. In the most recent blog he talks about how Romney is a straight person to be the president. Another blog post talks about Darwin's biological work actually relate to the god. Evolution is not a belief but it is pushed forward by belief. He likes to talk about religion and government which is really free in America. What present in his blog post are some ideas and advice to the government how to govern the country.

3 choice

1. Leo's amazing fantasy. I love fantasy,too. It is fun to read Leo's work because it let me take a trip to the dream world. Everything is fake but they are more attractive.

2. Nina's safe place. Sometimes I lose my sense of safety. People feel helpless sometimes and they really need something to keep them feel safe. I love the warm feeling with my familiar stuffs.

3.Gordon's fun stories. I can not find my clothes now. Gordon's work works on me. I always waste a lot of time on looking for clothes in the morning and now I understand they went to another world.

Revision 2

                                                    The secret of happiness

I have a secret that keeps me being happying all the time. Do you want to know it?    There is a place in the world you can not find, but I know where it is. That place seems close to the our community, but it is totally different from ours. Fortunately, I have the luck to take a view of this wonderful place. That was an dark evening, I had a headache caused by a tough mistake. At the last day of Thankgiving Break, I found that I had a lot of homework on the portal. I had no enough time to finish it. “Maybe I should take a little walk out side. I need some fresh air and a silent environment to think about it.” I think. The soft wind blew on my face, which made my eyesight became fuzzy. In the unseen world, a strange force attracted me to the backfield. Far away from the blackfield, it seemed like therewas a red light shining in the sky. “That’s impossible. There is no light like that at the backfield and it is not a plane. The shape looks like...a tall tower!” My curiosity forced me to step out to it. 

Closing to the cloud-kissing radio tower, I suddenly felt a burst. When I recovered my eyesight, I found that I was in a huge city. Around the tower, there is a tall wall around it. The tall radio tower may be the center of the city, which controls everything. I looked around,it was full of high-rise building. Several fountains made the city become more beautiful. I was amazed because I could not see anyone on the road, but I am sure someone was taking care of this clean city. On the radio tower, I saw the name of the city, Waterfront Park City.

I love the feeling when I walked alone on the road. There was no one talked to me so I felt relax mentally. Nothing would disturb me and I felt I am the most special one. When I am doing something else, for example playing video games, I always like to choose some characters different with others’ choice. This unique feeling can always satisfies my vanity. 

When I reached the edge of the city, a big lake around the city stopped me. I stepped forward because the time was very late, then I found that I could step on the lake but did not touch the water. I turned around and tried to take a full view of the city, and I found I direction signal “Worries Lake. Remember to be happy everyday!”  The lake around the city has a special ability, it can save everyone’s sadness in it. I tried to tell to the lake about my headache. Suddenly the kind burst that I had in front of the radio tower came again. I saw some spirits came out from the lake in a trance. They were closer and closer with big smiling. They flew around me and started to cast something. I saw some dark things floated to them and suddently those white spirits turned to darker. They flies back with angry faces and disapeared in the water. the spirit in the lake absorbed those worries! Then a sound appeared in my mind. “The more worries it absorbs, the darker the water is. I felt that my world was becoming bright. ” Now the lake is still present as sky blue.When I have something that makes me feel depressed, I can come back to the lake. Maybe in some day it will be dark as ink, but at that time I will be old. 

 I never tell about the city with my friends, because I do no want the lake to turn dark too fast. Actually, the lake was transparent, before I told it I had homework during Thanksgiving break.

Creative rivision

                                                          There is a place you can not see

There is a place in the world you can not find out, but I know where it is. That place seems close to the our community, but it is totally different with ours. Fortunately, I have the luck to take a view of this wonderful place. That was an dark evening, I had a headache caused by a tough mistake. “Maybe I should take a little walk out side. I need some fresh air and a silenced environment to think about it.” I think. The soft wind blew on my face, which made my eyesight became fuzzy. In the unseen world, a strange force attract me to the backfield. Far away from the blackfield, it seems like there is a red light shining in the sky. “That’s impossible. There is no light like that at the backfield and it is not a plane. The shape looks like...a tall tower!” My curiosity forced me stepping out to it. 

Closing to the cloud-kissing radio tower, I suddenly felt a burst. When I recovered my eyesight, I found that I was in a huge city. Around the tower, there is a tall wall around it. The tall radio tower may be the center of the city, which controls everything. I looked around, there are full of high-rise building. Several fountains made the city become more beautiful. I was amazed because I could not see anyone on the road, but I am sure someone are taking care of this clean city. On the radio tower, I saw the name of the city, Waterfront Park City.

I love the feeling when I walked alone on the road. When I am doing something else, for example playing video games, I always like to choose some characters different with others’ choice. This unique feeling can always satisfies me. 

When I reached the edge of the city, a big lake around the city stopped me. I stepped forward because the time was very late, then I found that I could step on the lake but did not touch the water. I turned around and tried to take a full view of the city, and I found I direction signal “Welfare Lake. Remember to be happy everyday!”  The lake around the city has a special ability, it can save everyone’s sadness in it. I tried to tell to the lake about my headache. Suddenly the kind burst came again, the water in the lake absorbed those worries. Then a sound appeared in my mind. “The more worries it absorbs, the darker the water is.” Now the lake is still present as sky blue.When I have something that makes me feel depressed, I can came back to the lake. Maybe in some day it will be dark as ink, but at that time I will be old. 

 I never tell about the city with my friends, because I do no want the lake turned dark to fast. Actually, the lake was transparent, before I told it I had homework during Thanksgiving break.

Strong and Weak

Strong

1.My caps are like two kids watching at me and it looks like asking me to bring them out and enjoy the sun.

2.All of these friends make my life become more interesting and convenient, and this is why I am glad to have them around me!

3. Table lamp is just like my body who help me to illuminate my table when I need to do my homework.

4.My daily necessities are standing on the shelf, they are like my personal guard to see whether I'm doing my homework or not during study hall.

5.When there is a problem or question that I don’t understand, I can just ask it and I will know the answer.

Weak

1.Everyday when I go back to dorm, I can sit on my comfortable chair and enjoy my wonderful free time.

2.At the right side of the table is an old wardrobe, sometimes it like to dress itself up with my clothes when I am not in my room.

3. Oh! I forgot one of my best friend-computer.

4.It is just like my second teacher in the school or at dorm.

5. Don't forget the Snapple on the floor, all of my energy is come from them.

Food

This break I had a lot delicious meal in New York. I still remember the Chinese hamburger we ate during the break. Almost every night Allen liu went out to buy Chinese hamburger for us as the food taken later at night because he always loses our game. Chinese hamburgers are really popular in New York. There is always a long line in front of the restaurant. Chinese hamburgers look similar as normal hamburger but it is white and oblate. In the white bread we can see brown meat and green pepper inside.  In Chinese, Chinese hamburgers are named meat in bread. It smell incredible good. People can smell it far away from it. When we ate those Chinese hamburger in the cabin, the enticing smell were full of the cabin. It tasted even better its smell. It gave me a satisfaction when I ate it. It was easily to take and really delicious. 

creative writing

                          There is a place you can not see

    There is a place in the world you can not find out, but I know where it is. This place located in CA campus and it is my proud. I am proud because no one can see it except me. I love this feeling. When I am doing something else, for example playing video games, I always like to choose some characters different with others choose. I named this place Avalon. It is at the backfield, with a small lake. People can step on the lake but do not touch the water. On the other side of the lake there is a city built on the hills. People can not see them will pass through those buildings. In the middle of the city there is a tall radio tower, which controls the city. The lake beside the city has a special ability, it can save your sadness in it. When I have something that makes me feel depressed, I can tell to the lake. The water in the lake with absorb those worries. The more worries it absorbs, the darker the water is. Now the lake is still sky blue. Maybe some day it will be dark as ink, but at that time I will be old. I never get into the city because these is a kind of magic inside. People get into there will use all of their efforts to look for happiness. I am afraid if I get into the city, I will give up my studying because I do not feel happy when I do my homework during break.