Wednesday, December 10, 2014

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                                                    The secret of happiness

I have a secret that keeps me being happying all the time. Do you want to know it?    There is a place in the world you can not find, but I know where it is. That place seems close to the our community, but it is totally different from ours. Fortunately, I have the luck to take a view of this wonderful place. That was an dark evening, I had a headache caused by a tough mistake. At the last day of Thankgiving Break, I found that I had a lot of homework on the portal. I had no enough time to finish it. “Maybe I should take a little walk out side. I need some fresh air and a silent environment to think about it.” I think. The soft wind blew on my face, which made my eyesight became fuzzy. In the unseen world, a strange force attracted me to the backfield. Far away from the blackfield, it seemed like therewas a red light shining in the sky. “That’s impossible. There is no light like that at the backfield and it is not a plane. The shape looks like...a tall tower!” My curiosity forced me to step out to it. 
Closing to the cloud-kissing radio tower, I suddenly felt a burst. When I recovered my eyesight, I found that I was in a huge city. Around the tower, there is a tall wall around it. The tall radio tower may be the center of the city, which controls everything. I looked around,it was full of high-rise building. Several fountains made the city become more beautiful. I was amazed because I could not see anyone on the road, but I am sure someone was taking care of this clean city. On the radio tower, I saw the name of the city, Waterfront Park City.
I love the feeling when I walked alone on the road. There was no one talked to me so I felt relax mentally. Nothing would disturb me and I felt I am the most special one. When I am doing something else, for example playing video games, I always like to choose some characters different with others’ choice. This unique feeling can always satisfies my vanity. 
When I reached the edge of the city, a big lake around the city stopped me. I stepped forward because the time was very late, then I found that I could step on the lake but did not touch the water. I turned around and tried to take a full view of the city, and I found I direction signal “Worries Lake. Remember to be happy everyday!”  The lake around the city has a special ability, it can save everyone’s sadness in it. I tried to tell to the lake about my headache. Suddenly the kind burst that I had in front of the radio tower came again. I saw some spirits came out from the lake in a trance. They were closer and closer with big smiling. They flew around me and started to cast something. I saw some dark things floated to them and suddently those white spirits turned to darker. They flies back with angry faces and disapeared in the water. the spirit in the lake absorbed those worries! Then a sound appeared in my mind. “The more worries it absorbs, the darker the water is. I felt that my world was becoming bright. ” Now the lake is still present as sky blue.When I have something that makes me feel depressed, I can come back to the lake. Maybe in some day it will be dark as ink, but at that time I will be old. 
 I never tell about the city with my friends, because I do no want the lake to turn dark too fast. Actually, the lake was transparent, before I told it I had homework during Thanksgiving break.

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